Sunday, March 23, 2008

2 WA7

Sick Board Dude
I had just gone to the garage to get some new paint. I had a passion for painting graffiti on almost any flat surface I could find. It was my dream to become a sponsored designer/artist for a skateboarding or surfing company. I had always been inspired by the artist for birdhouse, or Becker surf boards. The details and the critiques that I put into my work brought many people and was attraction around town. I had just started working on this sick picture of a cross with praying hands in front of it. I got my inspiring thoughts from tattoos, magazines, and thoughts from some of my fans.
It was a bright sunny day at the skate park, where I usually print my work. Some of the skaters came up to me and asked me “ Do you design skateboards or something?” “ No, but I wish I could.” I said. I turned to look at the guy and I noticed that he wasn’t a skater it was Bucky Lasek. “ Hey man I seen some of your work around town and I was wondering if you would like to design a board for me to use at the X games.” “ Uh, Uh, you’ve left me speechless.” I replied. “ So is it a yes or a no.” he said. “ Ya I will do it.” “ Sounds good meet me at my place at 11:00 a.m. tomorrow.”
I quickly finished my work and went to the store to load up on paint. The next morning I couldn’t wait till 11 so I had to go paint a wall. I walked to the back of my apartment complex where I painted a picture of a all sorts of metal pipes and rods bent around each other into letters that said “ live free.” Eleven finally came and I was more then pumped to go to Bucky’s place. When I arrived he had drawn me a picture of what he wanted on it. It was a picture of a skeleton that is holding a bulldog at the end of a metal chain. It took me a couple of days working on it because it was my first board that I had completed. Black and white were the only colors that Bucky wanted on it. So that made it a little bit simpler.
A week later I was at the X games watching my board go up and down the ramp. Bucky seemed to be pleased with the board, that he put in a good word for me to Birdhouse boards. The next day I went to work for the first day at my new job as the head designer of graphics and art. I was creating the designs for Tony Hawk, Shaun white, and Mark Reynolds.These were the biggest names of skateboarding. The best of the best. They were the face of skateboarding and I was designing their skateboards for a living. It was the job of my dreams.

2 comments:

Ms. Wiesner said...

I think the conjunction here should be "and" not "or" "I had always been inspired by the artist for birdhouse, or Becker surf boards"

Make sure each time you switch who is speaking in dialogue that you start a new paragraph.

I want him to be more intralled, more excited at the end. This is a HUGE opportunity that not many people would get.

kallen said...

"my work brought many people and was attraction around town." add "an" before attraction....
make him a little more excited...
besides that its good.